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Bitter End
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A clear evaluation,
both will bear the storm.
A silent passage, each his own,
will the blood and bone.
Who is first; rise to the fire;
his words etched a life.
Of different blood,
brothers by cause,
mothers weep, a world prays.
None have had a true beginning,
humanity hands us all.
That one drawn breath, evades us all...
till you stand at the bitter end.............Crow
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2004-11-16 12:52:29]
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Re: Bitter End
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:53:21 PM AEST
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very good write, loved the flow,
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Re: Bitter End
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:17:05 PM AEST
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great flow to this .. good write
peace and hope
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