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Dancing Alone
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:06:10 PM in AEST
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I am sick of dancing alone on the floor,
I am waiting for someone to walk through the door,
But no-one ever does, so alone I dance,
To be happy I’m not even given that chance.
There’s nobody here to admire my dress,
Its seems only the shadows I’m trying to impress,
The music is only present inside my head,
To the rest of the world the tone is dead.
My feet are sore, but dance forever I will,
While there’s blood in my veins I can’t sit still,
I want everyone to know that I am alive,
But my soul just feels like it’s somehow died.
All I do is just spin around & around,
Feel so very exhausted then hit the ground,
Then I get back up & start dancing again,
If I stop then I’ll feel the never ending pain.
Moving about keeps my minds cogs turning,
I don’t want to stop because I’ll feel the burning,
So here I am alone in the secluded ballroom,
The only company I have is my doom & gloom.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-16 12:06:10]
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:08:47 PM AEST
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| very good write once more |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by jonteD on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:35:20 PM AEST
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| Dance all night long, the words and the music will be your music, your partner and your lover. |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:55:59 PM AEST
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| sad, good write, i enjoyed the read.crow |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:18:21 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. its sad but expresses that feeling so well. .I ejoyed this poem.. I have actually felt this way before long ago so i can relate awesome write
Peace and hope
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:22:22 PM AEST
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Very intense write so moving so sad. Well written. Your words are a dance for everyone to see. So now you are no longer dancing alone. We all are dancing with you this day.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by pander on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:20:22 AM AEST
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This is one of your best writes Pixie. I'm pretty sure we've all had times when we've felt the way you have written about. This is so easy to relate to. I'm sure it will ring true in the hearts of many readers.
Well done once again.
Luv,
Pander
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:44:28 AM AEST
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Life can be magical Pixie and just when you think your alone another is waiting on the sidelines to make you smile again from the inside out.
You write poetry well.
Kie |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
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A sad, but beautiful write. The words are very descriptive and the poem has a wonderful rhythum.
Wonderful write
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:10:10 AM AEST
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| The fiddle plays..keep on dancing. If you stop..you'll freeze. I don't know why but this reminds me of that game..musical chairs..do you remember? |
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Re: Dancing Alone
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by lunartune on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:54:57 AM AEST
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| Really great write. Wow! you have alot of talent. Keep writing. Your stuff rocks! |
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