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Immune...
Contributed by
dominick-destruction
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:55:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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~IMMUNE~
I'm not so strong,
But I'm not willing to be weak...
Not when you are still much weaker then I am,
All of you with a closed mind,
Stappled shut eyes...
You don't see whut I see, You can't understand..
You're blind! ...
You never learn.
I rise from my ashes of shed skin
& then watch the rest of you burn & blister in the falmes..
& you do not know how to redeem yourselves..
..Evolve like A phoenix and fly again.
You have not tasted pain & suffering like this before,
& You know nothing of it's laws!
I have swallowed the dirt & curdled milk often..
I with an aquired taste,
Digest...
and fight my way through this.
I'm diamond celled with steel walls..
I won't break,
I destroy to rebuild....
..only to make it stronger.
I know now by way of heart how to get through..
It's not my game..
But it's my Rule...
(c) Dominick Destruction 18th July
Copyright ©
dominick-destruction
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2004-11-16 11:55:35]
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Re: Immune...
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:56:30 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, hope to read much more from you, this was an amazing write,
takecare,
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Re: Immune...
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by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:53:11 PM AEST
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| Excellent Write!! Keep writing and Posting always!! D.$. |
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Re: Immune...
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by Cesaria1 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:03:55 PM AEST
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