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Those Who lose...
Contributed by
Mangs
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:42:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Characters evolve, and then fade across the line,
Beyond which there is nothing.
They who rise to the podium, dance with enthusiasm.
But what about those who lose?
Life goes on...
As the bell of a faraway temple rings,
Hope is still kept alive in the barren core...
The unequivocal mind carries on,
With the desire to be at the top...
Before the final stop.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-11-16 08:42:52]
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Re: Those Who lose...
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:48:32 AM AEST
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a very good write, I have faced many failures but still try and battle on, sometimes it is quite hard, but i know in the end it will be worth it,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Those Who lose...
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by Mihiri on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:36:30 AM AEST
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Very well written. It's got a nice floaty feeling to it! keep it up!
--Mihiri |
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