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Forever love

Contributed by givingin on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:43:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She rode on her bike down the big hill, she didn't stop, all she could think of was how she would never be able to get back the man she love. When they where younger, they would hold each other whenever they could, but, the man would never say he loved her..... was he using her to just have some fun, or what was it. What made her feel this way about him, was it the fact that he would protect her when she needed protection, was it the fact that he was a total ass , but he would still talk to her and be nice to her, what was it? She was 14 now and the man was 18. She didn't know, it might be the way he looks at her, the way he smiles sometimes at silly things she says, it just might be the way he's always been there for her, sometimes emotionally , sometimes physically. what had she done, stopping their relationship.

She continued down the road, her front wheel entered the high way, then her back wheel, soon enough she was completely in the high way. The truck didn't stop, and it hit her head on. her body flew off the bike and landed on the front of the truck, she could see people's car's stopping. The truck backed up fast, she fell off the front of the truck and laid on her side, watching the truck drive away fast in the opposite direction. She lay on her side, listening to the mumbles of people around her, a hand reached out and turned her on her back. She lay there staring blankly into the sky, and through the time she was lying there all she could think of was the face of the man she loved.

A single tear dripped down the side of her cheek, and she shut her eyes.

She lay in bed. The man she loved beside her, he held her hand and was bent down on his knees. He straitened up and leaned over the girl, their lips touched and they had a short kiss. He leaned on her pillow and laid his head beside her. Don't leave me. he said.

I love you she said as she closed her eyes, and drifted into an eternal sleep.

Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-11-16 07:43:23]
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Re: Forever love (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:40:11 AM AEST
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Great story, brought a tear to my eye. Very sad story.

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