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Black Feathers
Contributed by
givingin
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black Wings
Angels twisted,
dark and light,
their wings so white,
they shine so bright.
Their heaven gone,
that they betrayed,
the light that came,
is now delayed.
They weep with tears,
as black as night,
they serve the dark,
betrayed the light.
In chains they’re bound,
they deserve much worse,
they betrayed their god,
and now they’re cursed.
They think of the past,
regretting bad things,
and now their white feathers,
turn into black wings
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givingin
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2004-11-16 07:32:51]
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Re: Black Feathers
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:34:08 AM AEST
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such a good dark write, wonderful flow and expression,
takecare,
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Re: Black Feathers
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:09:36 AM AEST
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| Very good |
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Re: Black Feathers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:39:21 AM AEST
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This is brilliant! I love it. It flows perfectly and is a beautiful dark write.
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Re: Black Feathers
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by mysticpoet on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:03:55 AM AEST
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| Very good poem |
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Re: Black Feathers
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:32:53 PM AEST
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wow!....so powerful and so dark...absolutely amazing...i loved it....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: Black Feathers
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:34:35 PM AEST
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very nice....reminds me of a poem i wrote entitled "Angelic Traitors"
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