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A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
Contributed by
Aquaelius
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:30:22 AM in AEST
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I feel the congas, I hear las maracas;
I am the music.
My body sways onto the floor,
the ocean of bailadores part at my crossing.
droplets of pride follow in my wake.
Like ripples she follows me: elgant, smooth.
If there are eyes open, they are focused on me.
If there is air breathed, that breathe is in glory of me.
I am soveriegn of my little circle,
Lord of this small area admist the chaos.
I only rule here... and she my loyal subject.
My hands barely feel the fabric,
like a knife, I spread my pride over her body.
Beneath my touch, she is but a pawn.
Beneath my stare, she is but the canvas of my masterpiece.
And she swoons and dips,
as branches in the wind.
And her hands rejoice as they touch my body.
I am a god, and she obeys my every will.
I care not who I was before now,
I care not who I was before we met.
I care only for that beat, and that music...
Our music.
I care only that she accepts who... is King.
Copyright ©
Aquaelius
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2004-11-16 07:30:22]
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Re: A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:31:52 AM AEST
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ohhh a great write. really lovely,
takecare,
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Re: A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:59:22 AM AEST
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| Oooh baby! Lets dance! I love dancing so much, and i loved how you wrote this one. It was seriously incredible, I got a tingly, lol. Great job!!!! Great vivid language and imagery. |
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Re: A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:28:57 AM AEST
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That wonderful feeling of being carried away!
A fun write.
Stitch |
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Re: A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
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by freckle on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:05:44 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I live in a neighborhood that has a lot of Mexican people in it. I have been invited to several parties of theirs and your poem describes exactly how it can be! Bonita! |
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Re: A Little Salsa For Your Troubles
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 09:39:25 PM AEST
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ohh this is wonderful! my son is taking dance and he loves that salsa lol, now i see why:) hugs n' love nessa
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