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Blank Pages
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:32:56 AM in AEST
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In my book there are so many blank pages,
It has been this way since the dark ages,
Just can’t seem to fill in the little gaps,
The sheets of paper in the wind they do flap.
I wonder if my book will ever be filled,
But how many tears will have to be spilled?
How many different emotions will have to be shown?
Will I have to let everything become full blown?
Everyone else’s books are filled with writing,
Their lives packed with happiness & things exciting,
I don’t feel like I have done very much at all,
Other than to keep rising up from my falls.
I sit here & stare at my blank existence on earth,
Just a thought I wonder how much it’s worth?
Not a lot I would imagine as I have not done much,
Never have I really lent out & touched.
I have not took life & embraced it really,
I haven’t done enough, not even nearly,
I sigh as I think back on my wasted young life,
I know what I should’ve done, but how do I put it right?
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pixie
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Re: Blank Pages
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:45:06 AM AEST
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I sigh as I think back on my wasted young life,
I know what I should’ve done, but how do I put it right?
I loved this poem. I felt the same way untilI had my baby..Now I see a reason to live... But i still feel like there is so much more I could have done. Like everyone has a great accomplishment... I'll say it again, I loved this one!!!!
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Re: Blank Pages
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:46:58 AM AEST
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| very good write again...you are a great one |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:01:54 AM AEST
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You really touch a sensitive issue there:
Why oh why didn't I do this when I was younger?
I look back and got nothing but mistakes to remember. Good write. |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:08:00 AM AEST
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Fantastic Pixie you are still young plenty of time to fill in those gaps.
My grandma use to say make the most of every day before you know it you will be old and grey.
Superb
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:47:35 AM AEST
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wow pixie great write,
I think you expressed your emotions well in this one.
Great write,
ttyl
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:49:48 AM AEST
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Excellent write Krissie, im sorry it has to be a sad one.
Someone once told me its the downs in lifes that really make up appreciate the ups. The storm will pass & you will have better days ahead. Think positive.
Very touching poem & really well writen.
Smile soon,
Corinna |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:56:03 AM AEST
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*hugs you tons*
Hunni, your books is gonna be full, with tears, with laughter and with all this amazing poetry! lol.
Really though...you have lived for alot, and your poetry shows how much you have been through in your life. You have done alot...if you see it that way.
I do understand though, I tend to feel this way quite a bit.
Great write hunni.
much love,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:43:09 AM AEST
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Well done. I hear these words and they sent chills through my body... It's seems I relate so much to your stories. Thanks for sharing.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by mysticpoet on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:12:33 AM AEST
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Good poem Pixie,
We all feel this way at one time or another.
I've thought in the past, if I die today, who would miss me, whose lives have I touched,
whose lifes are better because of me. There
are so many things in life I want to accomplish. Everyday, I try, don't always succeed, but try, to make a differance in at least one person's life.
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by lovesucks on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:58:24 AM AEST
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It really sounds like you are trying to find yourself here, I have felt that way so many times. You are a wonderful person, with such talent believe that and everything else will fall into place.
T |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by jonteD on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:36:55 PM AEST
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| I'd rather have blank pages to work on than the used one's I've thrown away. |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:18:37 PM AEST
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| embrace every page sweetheart......for nothing is ever blank........you've touched it......the memory just not ready to show you yet......beautiful talent....beautiful person......beautiful purpose......it's already right....... |
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Re: Blank Pages
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:57:18 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I LOVED THIS POEM!!! great job....i know this feeling all too well.....this is an excellent poem...and it touched me in a way i cant even explain....amazing job....i loved it soooo much.....thank you for writing it
Lots of Love
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Re: Blank Pages
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:14:46 PM AEST
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Keep writing your words. Keep sharing your thoughts. Your pages are filling faster than you thought. Your a poet with a great gift of words. It's a part of your life and will take up many books.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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