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Darkness
Contributed by
aprild
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:21:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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lost in the darkness
in a large open space
there is nothing i can see
smell, hear, or taste
am i really here
or is this just a dream
lost in the darkness
deep inside of me
could you hear me scream
could you hear me shout
i open my mouth
but nothing comes out
would you try to help
would you try to show me light
or leave me lost forever in the nite
would you try to take my hand
or would you flee
leaving me lost in this darkness
deep inside of me
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aprild
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2004-11-16 01:21:50]
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:26:22 AM AEST
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A truly excellent write here. I know how easy it is to get lost in the darkness and pain, if you ever want to talk, just pm me, i'm always here. Heh, maybe we could find our way out together *rolls eyes*
Take Care
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Re: Darkness
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:27:57 AM AEST
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I once got lost in the darkness, but i found my flashlight and i was doing well after that, haha, but anyway, nice write, excelently done
l8r
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Re: Darkness
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:00:01 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this.
I have just embraced my new found light.
If you read my poem 'I have forsaken you' it might make sense to you.
Might even encourage you to find your way.
Well I am always around if you should feel the need to talk to someone.
Take care of yourself
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Re: Darkness
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:35:53 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this poem as well...but sometimes i find that its better to live in the darkness....but hey thats just me well very well written |
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Re: Darkness
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by DirtyFool on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:03:47 PM AEST
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Great poem! I liked it alot!
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