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Picture of Flashback
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:51:49 AM in AEST
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My mind flashes back to the moments so glorious
remembering your face as a blurred out image
without you here i live in only loneliness
and my memories of you start to diminish
It's been so long since i've touched your skin
and oh so long since i've look into those eyes
but rest assure your far from forsaken
but the picture of you slowly dies
I remeber all the good talks we had
all the places we went to
the times we shared both good and bad
leads me to really miss you
If it were not for this picture I hold so close
I might not have remebered your face
but it is not the picture i charish the most
its all the memories that did not erase
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Re: Picture of Flashback
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:56:40 AM AEST
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Awww wow, this is a stunningly beautiful write. Extremely moving. It flows gently and is written to perfect. Excellent :o) I hope you hold onto those memories forever.
Take Care
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Re: Picture of Flashback
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:01:29 AM AEST
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| you made me cry, because the words are so very true, nearly 2 years ago i lost the best man i ever knew, beautiful write keep it up |
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Re: Picture of Flashback
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:25:50 AM AEST
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so wonderfully written and so true....
thanks for submitting this poem Dragontear27 |
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Re: Picture of Flashback
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by mysticpoet on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:17:35 AM AEST
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| That is a beautiful poem. I remember so much of the love of my parents but it's been so long since I saw the love in thier eyes, I cherish the pictures and videos I have of them. It helps put a face to all the memories I have. |
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Re: Picture of Flashback
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:14:08 PM AEST
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| I know EXACTLY how this feels. Yet another beautiful expression of missing a loved one... Cling to those beautiful memories, they giveus the comfort. |
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