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Beautiful Dreamer
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:36:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Beautiful Dreamer,
seasons pass-by,
starving and weak you still wait.
Burning beds , and transient souls,
keep you from showing yourself.
The meek might inherit,
the quality is dulled,
well within the hour to judge.
Here you stand, on a razor`s edge,
the call could go either way.
Bless me now, or bless me later,
never be present to receive the gift.
Moments pass to the blood-red moon,
all must not fall to the side.
Beautiful Dreamer awaken too...Crow
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crow
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2004-11-16 00:36:12]
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:49:41 AM AEST
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nice write, i thouroughly enjoyed it
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by Dragontear27 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:54:44 AM AEST
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excellent write, very deep in my point of view.
~~lates~~ |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:01:05 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, very thought proviking. :o)
Take Care
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:12:18 AM AEST
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I agree this is very tought provoking.. Love hte poem tho.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:55:46 AM AEST
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++very well written piece
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Beautiful Dreamer
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:23:42 PM AEST
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| Burning beds, and transient souls, keep you from showing yourself........wow.....how do you do that...... |
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