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Change
Contributed by
RomanticSoul
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There are many things I'd like to change
to better my life now,
I know what and why they are
but simply don't know how.
Is there something I must realize,
or something I must learn,
I'm so confused with all of this
should I give it such concern.
Support I surely need right now,
with patience till that day,
I can finally look back and say
I figured out the way.
Copyright ©
RomanticSoul
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2004-11-16 00:16:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:01:29 AM AEST (User
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this is a very refreshing, and open. I have no advise, take time.. good work Crow |
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Re: Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by maggie36 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:33:39 AM AEST (User
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Very nice poem, and I think alot of people
feel the same way, who's to say whats right and whats wrong, the only advise I can give is: Live, Love and Learn from your mistakes.
Maggie
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Re: Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:36:03 AM AEST (User
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Interesting poem, makes one think and look at it from their perspective too. Great Write
Take Care
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Re: Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:30:11 AM AEST (User
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That was one good poem, good job.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:01:16 PM AEST (User
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Noone's like you!!! My sister, my role model,
my secret keeper!! We will make our changes in life and in a few years we'll be lookin back as if it were a dream!! I love you!
were both poets and didn't know it!!!
4 life D.$. |
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