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Insane Asylum Within
Contributed by
DesperateSoul
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:21:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Insane Asylum Within
Staring out my window,
into darkness and rain
as the night grows deeper,
being alone drives me
insane...
My thoughts tell me stories
to bring back Old Pains,
My heart struggles to ignore
them, but is still butchered
in vain,
Silence all around,
so thick it feels strange.
Deeper into my past,
but now it gets rearranged.....
I feel myself physically beginning
to change,
I feel like a wasted burden
Who's growing Deranged........
Staring Out My Window Into Darkness
And Rain..........
by: **~~ $av $auci~~** 03
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DesperateSoul
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2004-11-15 23:21:47]
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Re: Insane Asylum Within
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by Aquaelius on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:35:33 PM AEST
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| Interesting... thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Insane Asylum Within
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:03:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful and Inspiring. You've laid your words and emotions so expertly on the page, its heart-wrenching. A powerful write here.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Insane Asylum Within
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:57:33 AM AEST
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powerful and deep and emotional, a combinaiton that has made into aa amazing write,
pixie xx |
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