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A Mosaic Of My Eyes
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:18:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My eyes will be the end of me
I see too much that I do not want to
My eyes are no grand position
They are something no one can ever love
Filled with darkness that is inside me
Vague and ambiguous shades of brown
Eyes that I wear like maquillages that are not me
You can’t see my soul in them they are too dark
If only they were beryl instead
Then I would feel differently about them
Brown a dominant color not belong not fitting me
I weak and have lost hope and they have no light
No fire burns in them like they once did
I have died inside and my eyes show that
My eyes are deformed and ugly
They are fitting of my face but not my soul
Or maybe they are maybe my soul is as black as them
And there is a part of it that has yet to be revealed
Deeply hidden and too well concealed
Maybe I am like Jekyll and Hyde
I do not know what evil my soul hides
That escapes through my eyes and shows the world
Or maybe they reveal how weak I am an how prone to cling I am
Maybe these are the reason that no one can love me
Why so many stay away and leave me behind broken
What ever I am people can see it in my eyes
That’s why I hate them most of all that I hate about me
Sometimes I wish to burn them out
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Re: A Mosaic Of My Eyes
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by aprild on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:58:26 AM AEST
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| Very well written. I loved it |
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Re: A Mosaic Of My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:06:00 AM AEST
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My own thoughts run along in that path sometimes too. There's no worse feeling than hating oneself, in my opinion. I hope things get better for you so that your eyes will shine as much as your talent does.
Take Care
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Re: A Mosaic Of My Eyes
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:13:36 AM AEST
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wonderfully written, the darkest side of the moon is the one that will shine brightest when exposed to the light,
L8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: A Mosaic Of My Eyes
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:58:28 AM AEST
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wow i feel like this alot, a very vivid and greatly expressed self struggling write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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