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If you loved me......
Contributed by
shadowsofmyheart
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:08:11 PM in AEST
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If you loved me
Would i know
Would you tell me
Let it show
Are you hiding your love
Is it even there
I just need someone to hug
Someone who will care
Can you see the pain in my heart
Past the smile in my eyes
Can you see my hurt
Past the "It's okay" lies
So next time you see me
Pour out your heart
Tell me you love me
That's just a start
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Re: If you loved me......
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:09:50 PM AEST
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| I really know how you feel on this one. I just got over the same problem. Its a tough one, but you will make it through. Awesome write! |
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Re: If you loved me......
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:32:08 PM AEST
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i definitely know this feeling. hang in there, they'll come around. and if they don't, they aren't worth it. nice, simple write. great job.
the raven |
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Re: If you loved me......
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:35:15 PM AEST
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| this is so good! thanks for posting it! |
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Re: If you loved me......
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:04:49 AM AEST
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Wow awesome write here, very nicely done.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: If you loved me......
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:04:33 AM AEST
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| funny how people can say "I LOVE" as nice as hearing it is...it is even better to feel that when the words are spoken they are really meant...great write... |
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Re: If you loved me......
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by justjonesy on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:30:09 PM AEST
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| great job...i have the same feelings when I write i think....just questioning...asking things you wish you could say |
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