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Snow Flake
Contributed by
candysears
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The snow sweet snow
I love the beauty of the
White beautiful flakes
Falling,
Trying to catch the flakes
In my mouth~
Making angel's in
The snow~
One big beautiful
Wonderland it makes!
Sleet freezing thin
Mirrors~
A looking glass if
You will~
How wonderful each season
Have pararde~
Showing all nature Beauty~
Copyright ©
candysears
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2004-11-15 21:49:42]
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Re: Snow Flake
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:17:50 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting write. Keep writting and they will get even better |
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Re: Snow Flake
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:55:15 AM AEST
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candysears
Over 400 reads and I am only the first to vote and only the second to comment.
I can hardly believe it. I found this poem very relaxing and senic--yes senic--I could vision your world covered in snow with angels imprinted. Children with toungs out catching flakes of snow manna.I could say more,but this is enough for you to know how your poem made me feel.
Relaxed and happy.
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Re: Snow Flake
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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Good imagery
well written
good job |
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Re: Snow Flake
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by Writing4Him on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 10:36:56 AM AEST
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"Mirrors...
A looking glass if
you will..."
Loved it! |
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Re: Snow Flake
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by tinybitinsane on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 06:29:23 PM AEST
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| <3 this |
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