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Feel
Contributed by
Lisa
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Trapped inside my head
The darkness closing in
Feelings left unsaid
Do you know how it feels?
Wanting the pain to go away
Left without any hope
Looking for a brighter day
Do you know how it feels?
No one ever knows
The pain I secertly hide
Trying not to show
Do you know how it feels?
Trying to be strong
Left feeling so weak
The days drag longer
Wanting just to feel
Copyright ©
Lisa
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2004-11-15 20:53:07]
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Re: Feel
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:28:36 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Feel
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:12:51 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem!! I really liked it. Sometimes I feel kinda like this. It is really well-written. Keep on writing! |
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Re: Feel
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:43:37 PM AEST
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i know these feelings so well...great write...i loved it...excellent poem
Lots of Love
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