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Curse
Contributed by
Silent_Storm
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:31:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You left behind you mark
and caused everything to fall.
You made us all lose hope
because you hated us now.
You hated everything
and us above all.
Yet you kept on moving
higher and higher…
You left your wound
and now it’s leaving its scar.
Will it ever go away?
Will it be able to reverse?
Or was it even there to begin with?
Copyright ©
Silent_Storm
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2004-11-15 20:31:21]
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Re: Curse
(User Rating: 1 )
by cocacola1331 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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| Another thought provoking poem. It's hard to imagine what goes on in other people's heads.... I wonder what people think goes on in mine.... I enjoy reading your poems, though they are dark and I need no more darkness to my life. Keep it up. |
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Re: Curse
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:33:28 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i agree with c.c. |
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