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My Sinking Soul
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:54:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My soul, sinking into a river of sadness
Swirling around in the dark, cold water
Drowning in a pool of sins & despair
What happened to myself?
What led me to this harmful depression?
The harm rises, from my sinful cuts
Emitting from my wound like lost spirits
An evil laugh could be heard in the near distance
My dark, wandering soul will linger for all eternity,
In a terrifying torment of pain & suffering.
The eternal, black abyss that is my heart,
Yearns for someone to break it out of it's icy grave
Deep in the vile pits of my soul lies a bed of nails
My body lays upon those nails, crimson blood flows...
It spills onto the frosty ground seeping into the floor
My sinking soul has dove into a hole of terror & betray
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-11-15 17:54:46]
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Re: My Sinking Soul
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by SuicideParty on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:10:14 PM AEST
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Just curious, was that betray supposed to be 'betrayal'? If it wasn't...oops.
Nice poem. Well worded, deep, slightly ominous, but nothing too disturbing I don't suppose.
I liked it, a lot. |
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Re: My Sinking Soul
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by imalive_enoughsaid on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:36:35 PM AEST
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| wow , there was sooo much imagry in that one...it really made me see what you were describing , and almost feel the pain....this is wonderful |
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