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Amdis: Immortal
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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An ivory fang drips the innocent, crimson blood
The fangs sink into the pulsing flesh of the neck
A scream, a horrible shriek, emits from the terrified mouth
It escapes into the night air like a scared crow
Evil, maniacal laughter entraps the bloody neck of the human
Yes, Amdis she was, a brutal blood drinker
With her hair as black as the haunting shadows
Her, fierce, eyes are of the purest, penetrating gold
The sultry light of the moon falls onto her silvery skin
The light dances along her body, illuminating her
The sickening game of hunter & prey comes into play
A cloud of death lures the doomed human
Sunrise will arrive soon, sooner than she had thought
Amdis fled like a guiltless child
The peaceful lavender sunrise captured the night.
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-11-15 17:53:44]
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Re: Amdis: Immortal
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by theMoth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:58:50 PM AEST
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It was certainly entertaining.
I really liked alot of the images.
Eyes of purest penetrating gold
will be memorable.
Good job on this.
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Re: Amdis: Immortal
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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OU conger up fear--good write.
inned |
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