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screw you world attitude
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:55:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i hate everything about this world,converted to lust blood rests in the dusts,
trembling in shame before god and all,mothernature takes her fall,
we strugle in the pursuit of a rite we cant reach,nothing left to learn or teach,
humanity lives as a leach on the land,
we live a hundred years and return to sand,
in high demand we claim our demises hidden in technology terrorist suprises,
we do not flinch give not an inch to the matter of revelation,
we wallow in pitty and start the war our country is riving like a whore,
sadom and gamore as sinfull as we are still this sickning place without its fill.
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blackholesun
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2004-11-15 15:55:39]
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Re: screw you world attitude
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:14:55 PM AEST
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That was very good, i liked each, each line was so rich and powerful, i could have lost myself in it.
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Re: screw you world attitude
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by theMoth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:57:05 PM AEST
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Very aggresive and fearless.
It was a good read!
--Mothy |
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Re: screw you world attitude
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:53:46 AM AEST
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| I agree, very good. it was thought provoking. I like your style! |
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Re: screw you world attitude
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:53:47 AM AEST
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| I agree, very good. it was thought provoking. I like your style! |
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