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Contributed by
deadinside
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:24:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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scratch out my eyes so I can't see
fill my lungs with water, i'm sick of breathing
wrap me up so I can't feel
give me anything to fill this empty space inside
something to numb me.
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2004-11-15 15:24:36]
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Re: end
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:18:18 PM AEST
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wow such emotions held within such a short peice... i know how this is, very well put.
cheers
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Re: end
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:36:38 AM AEST
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This was a spectacular poem! Lots of emotions and meaning you've put a thousand different feelings into a few simple lines. Well said. I'll be looking foraward to more of your poems!
--amanda-- |
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