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Watching
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:57:55 PM in AEST
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I feel like someone’s watching me,
I turn round but there’s nothing to see,
I can feel someone’s eyes burning my soul,
Like to unnerve me is there only goal.
Why is it me that they choose?
Is it my mind or body they wish to abuse?
Everywhere I go I know they come too,
I can feel them inside me moving right through.
I feel like a picture that is hung on show,
Things are following like a big, black crow,
They take cover in the shadows of night,
I am worried that trying to kill me they might.
My paranoia grows with my deep rooted fear,
For so long now I’ve failed to see clear,
I can not relax when I am being watched,
Having every single movement of mine clocked.
There are eyes & ears everywhere I can’t escape,
I feel bound to misery with invisible tape,
Those evil eyes will never stop & they will never leave,
They have all sorts of horrors hiding up their sleeves.
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pixie
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Re: Watching
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:06:49 PM AEST
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So very well expressed. This feeling of fear "Is someone watching me" Very well written. I think everyone has a fear of being stalked. Or watched. Maybe it's the mind of a poet with words that have to be shared.
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Re: Watching
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:10:08 PM AEST
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Not what I wanted to read today..lol I hear this almost on a daily basis from my son..he thinks the F.B.I is having him watched..who knows maybe it's true..I have nice legs..maybe they're watching me too..whooo ooo. rotflmao... I got the feeling you were being watched...
good write.. |
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Re: Watching
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by Red_October on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:19:52 PM AEST
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| Ooooh. I know this feeling. Great write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Watching
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by little_genna on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:52:33 PM AEST
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I have this feeling constantly...most of the time someone is staring at me,
specially rich he always stares at me.
but i know wot you mean, when i am out on my own i feel there is some one behind me. maybe us poets are a little paranoid.
gd write though hun as always.
take care
Gen xx |
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Re: Watching
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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ooooo... great write as always, thats how i feel when i have to walk down the road in the night ...only i know its coyotes lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Watching
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:14:45 PM AEST
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superb piece of writing. remember my friend, that there is always someone guarding your back. ready to protect you in a moments notice.
Hugs,
The Voice
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Re: Watching
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:20:30 AM AEST
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Aaah..strange thoughts and fears..I think you are exploring your mental world..
many subconscious emotions are noticed..
hugs..it is an amazing write..:-) venkat |
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