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die alone
Contributed by
luinil
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:57:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I died alone today
Thought I’d pass you there
Along the way
And as the sun crashed down
My heavy feet sank further
In the ground
Remember yesterday
I always thought you’d know
Just what to say
To keep me safe from this
There must’ve been some secret
That I missed
Where was your cross that day
That pinned you to the floor
And made you wait
Sorry to burden you
I never thought the lies you
Spilled were true
You came alone today
To drop your bloody flowers
Where I lay
Are you now midnight’s slave
Lying in the shadow
Of my grave
I may come back some day
Waking when your sun
Begins to fade
Take back calm you keep
And turn away as you
Lay down to sleep
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-11-15 13:57:25]
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Re: die alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:59:09 PM AEST
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very dark and emotional, well expressed poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: die alone
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by momentoftruth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:14:39 PM AEST
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| I really really like this poem-very well-written. Keep up the awesome work! |
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