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SPIRITUAL CITY
Contributed by
justinblue
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:56:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Worms hatching parasitic eggs of paranoia and self pity
Sadistic scavengers wishing to crumble my spiritual city
Godly gates of armored steel my defense
Dirt and grime of kaos affixed to the surface, with prayer i rinse
Layers of destructive regret decay my baracade
With the Holy Spirits diligent disinfecting power the bacteria will fade
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2004-11-15 13:56:57]
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Re: SPIRITUAL CITY
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by blackholesun on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:53:25 PM AEST
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| hey this is kinda gross,but i get the point.its a good write i liked it,and i hope your spirit stays strong!love,peace&chicken grease.xoxoxo |
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Re: SPIRITUAL CITY
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:52:04 AM AEST
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| Pretty cool. Like the metphors. |
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