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Found Your Flaw
Contributed by
Red_October
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:23:38 PM in AEST
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found your flaw, found your flaw, found your flaw
thought i would beg, thought i would plead, thought i would crawl
heart's too full for me, life's too short for me, love's too much for me
not enough, just a bite
not enough, do you feel slighted?
bright eyes, black hair, i found your flaw
your indecisive nature takes its toll
cancel my plans, reach for your hands, live with demands
fight for the night, hide from the light, i might not or i might
quick to dismiss in random cause
phantom decisions with no time to pause
hot and cold are insightful clues
don't push me or tell me what to do!
it's definitely not me, it's definitely you
acute awareness but no sense of sight
timing is everything, but that doesn't make it right
or wrong for that matter
or chaos begins
leaves us sleepless at separate ends
nothing here is set in stone
i might want you, but leave me alone
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Re: Found Your Flaw
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:52:27 PM AEST
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Great write..I really like this one..
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Re: Found Your Flaw
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:18:19 AM AEST
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You have a way of bringing an event in a relationship---small or major---to life.
Excellent write.
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Re: Found Your Flaw
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by rcav8ing on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:45:01 PM AEST
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| Wow and Ouch |
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