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This is hell
Contributed by
the_escort
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:58:09 PM in AEST
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There are no more ways of expressing it,
I’ve just realized that I’m accepting it.
I could find a way to be happy every day
Even if tomorrow won’t go my way.
Few have a life that’s worse than mine
But I’m smarter than all you guys.
I will do my best at the moment
Cause soon will come the torment.
Copyright ©
the_escort
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2004-11-15 12:58:09]
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Re: This is hell
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by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:00:39 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, this was a sad write,
pixie xx |
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Re: This is hell
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:10:55 PM AEST
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great job....welcome to YPDC...keep writing....good poem
Lots of Love
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Re: This is hell
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by tVirus on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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| i found your poem on the least read list... i can totally see why, but i cant say i havnt felt what you are clearly trying to describe, next time try a little harder to express it. |
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