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Ugly Duckling
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:05:16 PM in AEST
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I have always felt like the ugly duckling,
Behind my back everyone’s chuckling,
They call me names behind my back,
Just exactly what qualities did I lack?
Is it because I am adopted is that weird to you?
Is it because I speak my mind & words true?
Maybe it’s because of all my tattoos & scars,
Or maybe because academically I didn’t go far.
I was always quite a loner when I was at school,
Because I dared to be different & break rules,
Everyone stuck in their special little groups,
There wasn’t any room for people with misspent youth.
So I stuck up my two middle fingers,
Hoping the memory of me would forever linger,
I hated everyone as I hate two faced,
With such pure rage my heart was laced.
I wonder if I will ever become a beautiful swan,
Wonder if my heart so true will forever carry on,
I have never quite fitted in with society,
I am just an ugly duckling & no-one loves me.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-15 12:05:16]
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by Luinil on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:07:26 PM AEST
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| aw pixie, i know how you feel-- i'm so sorry you're feeling this way but i bet everyone here doesn't think you're an ugly duckling-- very sad and beautiful poem * |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by Clementine on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:11:47 PM AEST
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you ARE a beautiful swan! i can totally relate though, it was the same for me in school...but those "cliques" were never my cup of tea anyway...i liked being a loner...it meant i didnt have to follow anyone else...so be proud of who you are!
- clem |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by Mangs on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:14:52 PM AEST
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| nice....Im learnin to use words like "stuck up my two middle fingers"... could learn a lot from u... :-) |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:48:01 PM AEST
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This poem really was a good one to read. I also thanks you for your comments on my work to..Yours always keep my attention..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:15:41 PM AEST
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I used to feel the exact same way....
You did an awesome job with this one. I'm impressed. :) |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:14:51 PM AEST
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You are a beautiful swan....from this poem i can tell that it wasnt you who was the ugly duckling it was everyone else around you....you are very talented....i love this poem....great work
Lots of Love
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by jonteD on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:39:50 PM AEST
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| What have you become? A brilliant writer. |
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Re: Ugly Duckling
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:48:35 PM AEST
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| Pixie, you have the most beautiful heart and the most gentle soul. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. This isn't true at all. *S* Cynthia |
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