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I Blame Love
Contributed by
crash
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Love.
I curse the word
I'm already dead
if you hadn't heard
I'm dead on the inside
my soul has left
The life I live
is worse than death
Why?
With soo much life ahead
is this young man
already dead?
Maybe,
Because I have lost my light
My body still stands
but my soul has left the fight
Let's go back to that fateful day
when my soul ran away.
How could it hurt so much
what she had to say?
My life was hers
For to her, it I gave
I now see the ease
in which I dug my own grave
I never cared enoughh
though I loved her endlessly
but I never really showed
what she meant to me
She called me up
Said we nedded to talk
27 miles
I decided to walk
I knew something was wrong
by the tone that she used
Thinking we were doing good
I was soo confused
She wanted a break
and then so did my soul
Now there both gone
and I will never be whole
Her and I
were like glove and hand
But now my soul has left
As my life draws to an end
and what do I blame??
Love.
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crash
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2004-11-15 11:24:39]
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Re: I Blame Love
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by givingin on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:58:00 AM AEST
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Awww, crash,
that's such a sad poem,
(much love)
I hope you find away for your soul to return.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Blame Love
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by the_escort on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:02:10 PM AEST
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| Me too I hope you find away to return to hapiness. |
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Re: I Blame Love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:04:37 AM AEST
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I hope you find a way to regain that happiness and find your soul coming alive again. Great write.... I had almost started crying..... very powerful! Good job
~ :: Darkangeleyes57 :: ~ |
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Re: I Blame Love
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:40:55 AM AEST
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I feel this work, Being i a simular situation myself. glad you could share your thoughts with th world before you left my friend.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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