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Death For Me
Contributed by
crash
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:14:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you hate me?
Well I do
If you don't
Something's wrong with you
100 women
in less than a decade
I think of them each
as my life begins to fade
In my loneliness
I resort to suicide
My last attept to hide
from the pain
I feel inside
I see them all
near the stone where I lay
They all came back
though I'd cast them away
They've come together
for me today
They hurt soo much
I can't bear to stay
But I cannot leave
all of this I have to see
So many who cared
and I did this for me
I had touched on soo many lives
but I liked to play with knives
I didn't say goodbye
Never told them I cared
I may have loved them
but those thoughts I never shared
They all cared
but it was too late before I could see
I was loved
So this death was for me
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crash
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2004-11-15 11:14:41]
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Re: Death For Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:50:42 AM AEST
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wow crash,
that's very emotional,
I know how you feel, when you say
"In my loneliness
I resort to suicide
My last attept to hide
from the pain
I feel inside"
I am a lonley person as well,
I only look for someone to care but still I never find.
Good write, very emotional.
Keep up the good work
*~givingin~*
write me, we'll chat sometime. |
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Re: Death For Me
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:47:41 AM AEST
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Looking down on the aftermath, realsing that soo many cared for you when you killed yourself in their memory, that would hurt like a *****! I don't know where you found ispiration for this, but it is by far one of the best pems i have ever read.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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