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Unhappy Birthday To Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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No wonder on my birthday I felt so blue,
Because Mother dear I share it with you,
Why did you have to spoil my special day?
Why can’t your memory just fade away?
On November the 11th you would have been 40,
There’s not a single thing that you taught me,
You have marred my birthday until the day I die,
But for you never a single tear I will cry.
Thank you Mother for being so uncaring,
It’s just a shame with you this day I’m sharing,
I wish that it could be with someone who I love,
Not someone who thought babies were there to shove.
From pillar to post like I was some sort of toy,
Babies are meant to fill their parents with lots of joy,
But oh no not mine, mine were all for themselves,
Didn’t care about my state of mental health.
Birthdays are meant to make you feel happy,
But with you in my mind I always feel crappy,
So dear Mother another year has passed,
I just wish that my bad feeling of you didn’t last.
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pixie
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by pander on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:48:42 AM AEST
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My dear Pixie,
There is such emotion here, I am almost at a loss as to what I should say. As always with your work, the poem is fantastic. But the heart-felt story it tells is very upsetting.
*Hugging you forever*
Love,
Pander
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:25:46 AM AEST
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Awww this is an unbelievingly moving write. Both sad and bittersweet... I hope for the time when your birthday is yours, and yours alone.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by givingin on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:32:05 AM AEST
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Aww, hun,
I'm sorry you feel that way.
This was a good write ,keep it up,
a good release of emotions.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:00:58 AM AEST
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| i really did like this one..Heartfelt and very in depth.. |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by little_genna on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:39:51 AM AEST
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This is really amazing like all your work,
I really enjoyed reading it even though it has such a sad feel.
In time may be these feelings will start to fade,
But you should enjoy it as your day regardless of your mother.
*Hugs you *
Take care hun
Gen xx |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by Mangs on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:21:07 AM AEST
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hey pixie....
Happy Birthday...and cheer up...heres a little piece of advice i cherish the most....
There'll be two dates on your tombstone
And all your friends will read 'em
But all that's gonna matter is that little dash between 'em..."
dont live in the past....
Love Umang. |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by the_escort on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:21:40 PM AEST
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| Hi, that is such a sad writing. It's not easy living with mean parents. Mine are also unperfect. But I tell myself that they have good and bad things about them, I write poems about that. Give this some thought, maybe it will help you. It helped me. |
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Re: Unhappy Birthday To Me
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by jonteD on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:38:08 PM AEST
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| Not a good day for me either - sigh |
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