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World Of Emptiness

Contributed by Satrianus on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:41:23 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Trapped inside, in my dreams
Nothing is what it really seems.
In my world of emptiness
Feel my life slowly progress

Easy money, you must confess, is all you ever wanted
No hard work, blood, sweat and tears, just taking it for granted

Need to find my lost sight
It has gone dark, which was once bright
Back to the life I once had
Before I find myself dead

You're sucking up all that is good and you're spitting out the rest
Stab your friends in their backs and think that you're the best.

Easy money, you must confess, is all you ever wanted
No hard work, blood, sweat and tears, just taking it for granted

Trapped inside, in my dreams
Nothing is what it really seems.
In my world of emptiness
Feel my life slowly progress

Copyright © Satrianus ... [ 2004-11-15 02:41:23]
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Re: World Of Emptiness (User Rating: 1 )
by applehead on Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 10:28:46 PM AEST
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My kind of stuff. Is that lyrics to a song you wrote? Cause it would definitly work. I keep reading the least read poems and in my opinion the out most of the others. I hope mine make the least read poems I'd be honored. As always thanks for sharing it.

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