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The Great Enchantress
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venkat
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:33:49 AM in AEST
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Ever auspicious to virtuous
Enchantress of the heaven’s Lord
Indrani, the queen of cosmos
Bestows prowess to worshippers
By her compassionate glances
Cools down the heat of great sins
Protects sages and pious people
By shining looks helps angels
By her beauty fascinates the Lord
Through her words of inspiration
Bestows power to righteous men
By her words of love joy to women
May she shine as golden rayed sun
In the space of the hearts of devotees!
Her face shines as autumnal moon,
Her tresses shine as blue clouds,
Her eyes shine as beautiful blue lotuses.
May her sweet smile light up the quarters
To wash down the darkness of my lust!
Obeisance to Indrani, whose breasts
Shine as golden pitchers bearing nectar
To feed creatures of the three worlds;
That Lady whose body bears invisible
Cosmic flames and who gave birth
To Sun, Moon, Stars and the Earth;
That Lady who is all pervading as the sky
Shall enter my body like a river of energy;
May She flow as brilliant light in my veins!
May She flow as blissful nectar in my brain!
May She flow as wine divine in my words!
May that Lady ever shine in my heart’s lotus!
15-11-2004
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venkat
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by namesaretaken on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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Very insperational indeed
it sounds like it could be a prayer.
With this work you really brought Indrani spirit to light
She is one of the nine cosmic deities in hinduism right?
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:45:36 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful and inspirational....really a marvellous prayer..:o) K |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:05:34 AM AEST
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May her sweet smile light up the quarters
To wash down the darkness of my lust!
To think that you would pray for such a thing..
It makes you seem..human. I thought you were above
all of that..(a small joke..) This is beautiful and I did enjoy.. |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:31:33 AM AEST
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wow Venkat this was really inspirational and written at the hands of a master *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx
its really great to see you posting again my friend xxxx |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:13:49 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful and expertly composed. It is a blessing and wonderful to see you posting again.
I look forward to your next poem.
Kie |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:21:40 AM AEST
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Worth the wait...welcome back venkat
descriptive and inspirational. I hope all your May's become true!
Phil |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:24:25 AM AEST
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Wonderful to see you posting again, my friend.... and with such a great piece..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by shelby on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:45:12 PM AEST
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first let me say my dear friend you have been greatly missed good to see you secondly this is yet again a true masterpiece!
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by arden on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:17:20 AM AEST
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as others have said and i join in with them and say that i am so happy that you are again posting. :)
your beautiful writes my friend have been greatly missed.
this was utteryly amazing venkat. so beautiful. i loved it. it touched me.
great work as always. 5 stars
Becky |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:15:25 AM AEST
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lifts the spirit to new heights, a wonderful prayer my friend
Shari |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:10:48 AM AEST
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Good to see you writing again buddy. I had
missed reading your beautiful poetry. I think
this poem was well worth the wait... it was
just wonderful. You have painted a beautiful
picture my friend. I wish I could posess some
of your talent!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:25:40 AM AEST
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Wow! Venkat why don't i ever meet woman like that?
i am at a loss for words, fantastic write.
Johnny. |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:54:30 PM AEST
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A heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
Awesome write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
So happy to see u feeling better. |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:06:25 PM AEST
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truely beautiful, as always, my friend, huggies n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:52:09 AM AEST
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Such devotion of her 'compassionate glances', permits your vision to find record in near-astral dimensions...
"Obeisance to Indrani, whose breasts
Shine as golden pitchers bearing nectar
To feed creatures of the three worlds;"
"May she shine as golden rayed sun
In the space of the hearts of devotees!"
These are such befitting images of a goddess' splendour.
Always a pleasure, venkat. |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:42:10 PM AEST
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'May she flow as wine divine my words!'
It seems to me your prayer was answerd!
Friend, Bizzy |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:44:24 AM AEST
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| truely splendid and amazingly beautiful poem.You are the very best on this ite. |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:47:48 PM AEST
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Oh how I have missed the beauty of your words my friend
Shari |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by Kie on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 06:33:57 AM AEST
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The title was incredible Venkat and that is what initially drew me to this poem. You know i've always been interested in India. Believe it or not i've even read geographical type surveys of the landscape in different areas. It is like everywhere in the world all in one country, if that makes sense. There is something enthralling about visiting there and the wedding's are I would think unforgettable.
Now back on subject. I've always found your poetry to be great, intellectual, deep and full of inspiration.
It was a pleasure to read this poem.
Kie |
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Re: The Great Enchantress
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 06:49:06 AM AEST
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Venkat, you just blow me away with ur divine work. A truly talented poet who shines like the stars with his uniqueness. Well done.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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