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You
Contributed by
clementine
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your magic marker fills in all
the empty spaces within me.
Let your face come close to mine
so I can feel you breathe.
Everything inside of you
is everything inside of me.
When the sun casts down its rays,
your shadow is right by mine.
It never falls behind the trees.
It never tries to hide.
And I could pass away peacefully
in the comfort of your grace.
When you align your eyes with mine,
it's your dreams that I can trace.
So just hold me for a while
until I'm settled in completely,
then send me off to sleep
with that song you sing so sweetly...
Copyright ©
clementine
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2004-11-14 23:29:14]
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:15:01 AM AEST
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| very charming poem, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: You
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by girish on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:05:09 AM AEST
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i just started writing love poems and submitted 2 pieces this is good read my poems and comment
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:04:18 AM AEST
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| aww this is so beautiful. very heartfelt |
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Re: You
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by wakegurl77 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:48:07 PM AEST
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great write
we all want someone like that who we can feel that way about but not all so lucky
Allways Sincere
Leana |
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