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If Only
Contributed by
Silent_Storm
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If only life were fair.
Maybe we’d all be a little bit happier.
If only we didn’t take things for granted.
Maybe we’d all be a little bit more satisfied.
If only we realized things, the opportunities we have.
Maybe we’d all have a better life.
If only we could get along.
Maybe there would be less suffering.
If only all wishes could come true.
If only life were fair….
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Silent_Storm
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2004-11-14 19:56:18]
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Re: If Only
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by TheRaven on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 08:55:57 PM AEST
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If only...I know the feeling. Hang in there. Great write.
the raven |
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Re: If Only
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:56:54 PM AEST
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IF indeed... Good write
Jenni |
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Re: If Only
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by N0body on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:29:56 PM AEST
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| Yes, all very true...i like a lot! Keep posting |
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Re: If Only
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by cocacola1331 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:54:06 PM AEST
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| If only we realized things before it was too late. If only... if only. That's a very touching poem, especially when I could apply it to myself... IF ONLY.... I wish there would be more people out there in that big old world that realized all of this... if only.... |
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