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Contributed by
lacymaeflower
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm at the end of my rope
I can take no more
Cut the strings
Let me be free
I want to fly
I want to die
I want to see the sky
I want to see myself die
Just my body not my soul
It will live on in the hearts, minds,
and souls of others
If that happens, then I never really will die
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2004-11-14 18:32:44]
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Re: me
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:41:16 PM AEST
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ouch... painfull knowing you dont want anyone to remember you.. if they do you wont let yourself go..
Good write though
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Re: me
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by Unheard_Mute on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:11:07 PM AEST
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| Three suicidal poems, how sad, I need to know wether this is just you getting out your emotions, or foreboding a sad legacy... |
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