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tell me
Contributed by
amatt
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:54:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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tell me
what would you do
if everyone that you cared about
just started to hate you
it would be like a knife
stuck in you
that you couldnt pull out
would you give up and die
or just cry
would you try to pull it out
or just let it go in deeper
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Re: tell me
(User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:58:29 PM AEST
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that was really well put, i like it a lot,
thanks for sharing
hope things get better soon
cheers
demelza |
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Re: tell me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:06:03 PM AEST
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i love it i love it i love it!!!!!
it's beautiful....
"would you try to pull it out
or just let it go in deeper"
(my favorite part) |
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