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Simply laying lonely
Contributed by
neglected1
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:10:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dancing together in the flickering candle lights glow
Exchange of plentiful kisses
Discovering each other like never before
Oh, what a perfect night this has been
You laying next to me
Our limbs entagled together
I'm sure a thousand words were said
But truly only three captured my heart
I love you, those of which meant the most
Running my fingers through your hair
As you tell me a story
Something i will never forget
You pulled out a piece of string
And made me hold onto one end
You went on selling yourself to me
I was already sold the first time i met you
You went on saying how your emotions are thin just like the string
But your a good man
'I want to be the one inside of you
To come home to every night
Eventually have your children
A family to call our own
Even when things are shaky
We will come out on top
I just love you so much
So with this symbol that i recognize myself with
Will you marry me?'
A ring slowly slides down the string
Connecting ourselves as one
The ring hits my finger
You kiss my forehead ever so gently
Music starts playing
Yes, it was all just a dream
Damn my mind
Such an untouchable wonderful gift
I will never feel the real meaning
Behind the special symbol
Simply just laying here lonely
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2004-11-14 17:10:36]
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Re: Simply laying lonely
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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I hope this isn't based on real feelings.You sound like a teriffic beautiful person.Dreams do come true.
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Re: Simply laying lonely
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by Kione on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:58:27 PM AEST
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| That poem touched me deeply. Terrific. I also hope it is not based on a real life occurance. And if it is, Good luck. Shocked me when you said it was a dream in there! |
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