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Internal Hollocaust
Contributed by
GurlyGirl
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:47:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Light the matches
See the flame
Forget my face
Forget my name
Just like the candle
On the ledge
I'm on fire
I'm on edge
Feel the burning
Deep inside
Scolding Hate
And searing pride
My brain explodes
Inside my head
I'm too alive
To just be dead
My blood will boil
Skin turns black
I've gone too far
To take it back
My heart is sinking
So far down
I throw away
The sacred crown
The chance I once
Posessed to live
Was not enough
For me to give
You hurt me 'till
I fell apart
You lit the fire
In my heart
No longer is it
Harmless fun
I tried to turn
I tried to run
But like the devil
Perched on your shelf
Can't hide the pain
Inside yourself
Death by fire
Burning hot
My organs all
Begin to rot
No one knows
No one will see
The evil sin
You gave to me
No one knows
What it's about
I'm dying from
The inside out
Copyright ©
GurlyGirl
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2004-11-14 15:47:35]
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Re: Internal Hollocaust
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:49:39 PM AEST
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| omgosh i loved that it was so good!! props to you!! |
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Re: Internal Hollocaust
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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your poems flow nicely
however what makes them work is the pain you are obviously feeling right now. hope things turn out better for you, i'd like to see what you can do with poetry when you're happy :) |
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Re: Internal Hollocaust
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by Dralion on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:54:38 PM AEST
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Very good!
Just let it out. As Shrek says "Better out than in" |
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Re: Internal Hollocaust
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by amatt on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:08:24 PM AEST
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i read one of your other ones too that was great and this one was too....i really like your poems
major ups to you |
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Re: Internal Hollocaust
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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wow!...that was fantastic....i absolutely loved it...very dark and powerful....amazing poem.....great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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