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Pitiful
Contributed by
Corruptor
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Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In quiet woods he walks alone
-A statue made to walk and talk.
Nobody hears his heavy steps,
No person sees his teary face.
The only thing the world knows of him
Is the anger in his heart
And the sadness of something
That could never be.
Instead of something beautiful,
He’s now being something pitiful.
Copyright ©
Corruptor
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2002-11-21 09:00:00]
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Re: Pitiful
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:28:47 PM AEST
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| This is sad,I liked this short peice!Christina |
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Re: Pitiful
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:55:04 PM AEST
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This is so sad in such few
short words, i really enjoyed this
one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Pitiful
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by gina on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:47:09 PM AEST
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| he really sounds pitiful, hope ur not talkin about urself :) good write |
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