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Distant Screams Crying Out For Help
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:35:22 PM in AEST
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I hear distant screams all around me
Of people who were once there
Of people who are there now
Of everyone
They cry out to me
Asking for my help
But I can't find them
They're all lost to me
All somewhere out of my reach
I try to help them
But with each step I take
There screams seem to get farther away
I'm reaching out
Hoping to find someone there
But the darkness is all around
And the distant screams still cry out
I wish I could find them
To help them get out of wherever they are
They seem to be in so much pain
Suddenly I feel a breath on my neck
I turn around to see no one there
The screams have all stopped
Then my screams begin
I'm yelling for help
Realizing it was me all along
Hearing my own distant screams
Crying out for help
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Re: Distant Screams Crying Out For Help
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:32:00 PM AEST
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you put a surprising twist to the ending.. i enjoyed reading your piece.. i hope you find whatever your looking for and get help with those forces coming from within..
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Distant Screams Crying Out For Help
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by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:28:28 AM AEST
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very deep and dark, emotionally written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Distant Screams Crying Out For Help
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 08:56:51 AM AEST
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| i love this poem, i like poems from the heart that have good endings, i try 2 encorperate both these things ni2 mi work but since i like 2 write about mi own experiences and things im passionite about this is sumtimes hard congrats on this great piece of work, i hav no idea y it is in the least read section i wood recogmend this poem 2 any1 lots of love hope ur all good kc |
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