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God took you away... maybe he can take me too
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My life is paper thin and slowly burning and lying this awful life away.
Wishing that tomorrow will be better than today is the best thing you can wish for, but the least likely wish to come true.
Maybe I should wish for you instead.
Would you hear me late at night when I cry your name?
Would you see me when I'm dying here alone for you?
And would you hug me when you saw my open arms for you?
Of course you would... you loved me.
But god took you away... maybe he can take me too.
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Re: God took you away... maybe he can take me too
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:08:16 PM AEST
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| i love dark poetry and this is a great one! it's so sad....and I love it. you really show your emotion in this. I've felt the same as you did when you wrote this |
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Re: God took you away... maybe he can take me too
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by Faust on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 10:29:11 PM AEST
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This is a very short poem but the feeling is expressed rather well.
Eternally Punished,
Faust. |
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