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Turn..deadly night
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:54:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walking along the blackness
I feel you bite my neck
So vicious in your quest to kill
Relentless in your path of death
I turn, turn into the night
So dead and bleeding with anger
Or maybe I'm just apathy
Waiting to surrender
You praise me on my immediate transformation
A rippling thrill dripping off your eyes
I guess I've become so dark
That I breathe your venom and become the toxins
I turn, turn on you
Soul so empty but emotions so clear
Your eyes turn red, evil and malicious
But I too, can express my own evils
Morbid thoughts cross our minds
But I can still see the light
I turn, turn to death
My instinct bleeding with terror
I cut you open with my forgotten spirit
No longer can you rip away the innocence
I walk the lonely path of remorse blindly
Seeing the things I never wanted to see
And I turn, turn on me.....
You feel the sting as I bite your neck
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Inevitable
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Re: Turn..deadly night
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by thepos on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:57:50 PM AEST
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| I wouldn't say that's a dark poem. It's more of a horror. And the poem was a little confusing. Oh, and vampires aren't vicious. |
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Re: Turn..deadly night
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:57:54 PM AEST
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very good vampire write, I can never seem to do a decent vampire poem, great job,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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