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Just a thought
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Just a thought...
Why can't I breathe?
After I hurt u....things got all screwed
Just a thought....
Why can't I live?
I'm just a worthless...vampire. Cold and dead inside
Just a thought...
Sometimes I feel remorse
Other times....I can just shake it all away
Just a thought...
Am I a nothing?
Blood in my throat...pain etched across my heart..is this really me?
So many thoughts can consume me as the lies do
So many things gone on too long
So many bloodied hands and backwords whispers
Too many regrets
It's not worth it...being dead like this
I need a wake up call
I need to walk on the ice
I'm cold outside...but on the inside?
Just a thought...
Did I really love u?
......hell no
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Inevitable
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2004-11-14 13:52:25]
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Re: Just a thought
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:35:25 PM AEST
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| Nicely done! I loved the last line. XD |
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Re: Just a thought
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by N0body on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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| ^_^ yeah! I really liked this, i agree, the last line really did make the whole poem. keep it up! |
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