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The Poem That Bleeds Ink
Contributed by
thepos
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:25:36 PM in AEST
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The Poem That Bleeds Ink
Why do I bleed,
But never feel?
The times that I cry,
I wish it were real.
Life makes me fall,
death makes me hurt.
I've ***** up my life,
I'm no diferent then dirt.
I tell you these words,
So you don't be like me.
I've been to hell and came back,
It's something you shouldn't see.
I waste my time to talk,
so you should listen to me well.
I've ruined others lives,
I should be locked in a cell.
I can't stop crying inside,
My tears can't come out.
I wish I can scream,
I wish I could shout.
Please leave my alone,
I won't talk any more.
Stop saying I can change,
My heart is already tore.
--Evan L.--
www.thepoemsofsorrow.com
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Re: The Poem That Bleeds Ink
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by Inevitable on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:47:39 PM AEST
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| Sounds alot like something i'd write. Very good |
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Re: The Poem That Bleeds Ink
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:58:31 PM AEST
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very dark and sad, very well written,
pixie xx |
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