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The Nightmare I Had Last Night
Contributed by
thepos
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:22:25 PM in AEST
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The Nightmare I Had Last Night
Last night I had a dream,
That all children were dead.
The chills of the pain,
Went directly to my head.
The screams of all the mothers,
Watching their babies die.
I did nothing but watch, as the mothers cried.
The disgusting smell of the bodies,
The pain they all went threw.
First wondering what did it,
Intill I found out who.
I killed all the children,
I stared left and right.
The fear on all the faces,
They'll never see tonight.
I held a little girl,
She lay upon my hands.
My tears fall of my chin,
And on her blood it lands.
I was too late to stop me,
And all the things I've done,
I cannot say I'm sorry,
I cannot start to run.
Blood driped off my hands,
Falling to the ground.
There was nothing but silence,
As I looked around.
I slowly placed her down,
Then closed her eyes.
I can't believe what I've done,
I only trembled and asked "why?".
I looked back at everyone,
Then took the knife I used.
To kill all the children,
The ones that I abused.
I raised the knife up,
Then I closed my eyes.
Slowly and sadly I stabed my self,
Then muttered "good-bye"
--Evan L.--
www.thepoemsofsorrow.com
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Re: The Nightmare I Had Last Night
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:41:05 PM AEST
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what a dark and sad nightmare.. but it ended up being a wonderful write.. its crazy how different and odd our dreams can be.. do they have a hidden message behind it all though? hmm it really makes you think..
Great write
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Re: The Nightmare I Had Last Night
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by surge_joebot on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:17:06 AM AEST
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| its brilliant, but im sad you dreamed of such sad things, i dream of my mother, she doesnt even see me in my dreams, my friend dream she was a cartoon seagull, dreams are funny things sometimes, so far this year ive dreamed i was pregnant twice |
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Re: The Nightmare I Had Last Night
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:10:20 AM AEST
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I'm sorry I found your poem sick.
Too much child abuse in this world.I hope you dream happy dreams for now on---other than my feelings I found your write was written well.Keep posting.
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