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i remeber
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:42:23 PM in AEST
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I remember when you youste yold me on your shoulders
I remember you fed me
I remember when you would take me to hospital
But the one thing i dont remember is why you left.
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Re: i remeber
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:51:07 PM AEST
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Interesting. Simple and yet very telling.
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Re: i remeber
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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| I agree with Stitch, very interesting indeed |
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Re: i remeber
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:13:17 PM AEST
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Wow! I really liked this poem! And don't take that lightly! I read the rest of you poetry and then this one last. It hit me like a bullet to the heart. It was so short, yet conveyed such power and emotion... I think you should try to see if you coul;d get it published.
~*Naomi Maverick Moonligh*~ |
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