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The Perfect Chance
Contributed by
sean88
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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On a dark lacklustre evening,
When the weak are eaten at will
And dont show a sign of breathing,
The hidious creatures are revealed
Showing their prowess among the crowd
They neither care nor dare,
But would rather ask questions later
Than stand and watch the chance pass by,
On what would seem for them
Such a wondress nights sky
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-11-14 10:38:24]
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Re: The Perfect Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:39:10 AM AEST
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dark and well written, flow was great,
takecare,
pxie xx |
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Re: The Perfect Chance
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:52:46 AM AEST
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Good dark poem Nice job
~~DENNIS~~ |
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