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Dreaming of You
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The things I would do if I got half a chance
I’d dive into your arms at your first glance
Everything is so perfect within your stance
There is nothing about you that I would enhance
You are attractive and endearing to the human eye
As I see you and you pass me by
I know you know something but you don’t know the half
What I care for you, if I revealed you might laugh
Because of the surprise you may think it’s a joke
But if you could see what I see, you are no ordinary bloke
But then again, I am only dreaming
Are you there at all, I wonder this feeling
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SweetRhythm
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2004-11-14 09:45:56]
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by pixie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:47:47 AM AEST
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awww Cor this is lovely, and sad also, a mixture of emotions,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:21:25 PM AEST
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Why not dream it up. Write it up. I am getting rather up in years and I do that. I am not hurting anyone and it makes me happier. Do what is right for you, chickie.
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Re: Dreaming of You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:26:58 PM AEST
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great work once again.
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