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Am I a fool?
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:47:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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at one time all things were so clear to me,
you were right here, right where you wanted to be.
all it took was just one look for me to know what was on your mind,
now i'm in shock that when i needed you you were kind?
we parted ways, not so long ago, but I wanted you to know,
that I still miss the way we used to talk,
back when things were good,
and how I only wish I could,
reach for you tonight and feel you beside me
but when i reach out tonight where will you be?
Not here with me, not anywhere near me>
why must it all be so hard, for me to say what i need to say,
i let you go, i said nothing to make you stay,
but now i'm wishing that i would of,
not know that i should of
not know if you care at all.
but I did melt when I got your call,
even though we didn't speak, i felt the tears run down my cold cheek,
you voice sounded so sweet, i was reminded of the passion we once had,
how now it all seems to have gone bad
but with one simple call,
i knew i lost it all,
but now i wander if i should reach out for you
just one last time...
just one last time to feel your arms craddle me,
one last time to hear you say my name,
just one last time to look in your eyes,
but then you would see me cry.
but i must keep my tears to my self for you don't understand how i needed you
you'll never understand how deep the wounds of my heart go,
but there is some small thing that binds me to you,
i don't know what it is but i do know,
that my love for you will always be here,
just one last time let me say that I love you...
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brokenwings
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2004-11-14 01:47:59]
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Re: Am I a fool?
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:07:34 AM AEST
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Another very powerful write
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Re: Am I a fool?
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by veenu on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 03:32:08 AM AEST
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wow !!!!!!!that just rocked me
always i will say love and also loved by some one else .......keep sharing naveen |
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Re: Am I a fool?
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:03:07 AM AEST
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| had to log back-in to comment on this, gave this an A+ for the content, won`t offer any advice, this is real, good write. take care... Crow |
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